Some really enjoyable parts of the chapter include: + Severus almost accidentally admitting to himself that he likes the bikini + the acceptance Severus was able to show and receive from his wife in his dreams. Now to slowly make it a reality + portrait lore, including more bolstering of Headmaster Black's cleverness, being able to retcon/update a portrait to better match the original subject, and miniscule references to the Baron's life (i.e., memories the ghost-self has of his human life as it related to his Head). I wouldn't say no to more details on the Baron's human life. 🤠+ Snakelets being their own, actualized selves (Side note: the whole Crankshaft versus Crookshanks thing half-broke my brain for a moment when we first met Harper's Kneazle. For just a fleeting moment, I thought Harper believed he owned Hermione's familiar. I had a good chuckle at myself.)
Mind, the whole thing was a resounding success, but I can't very well parrot back every paragraph.
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Some really enjoyable parts of the chapter include:
+ Severus almost accidentally admitting to himself that he likes the bikini
+ the acceptance Severus was able to show and receive from his wife in his dreams. Now to slowly make it a reality
+ portrait lore, including more bolstering of Headmaster Black's cleverness, being able to retcon/update a portrait to better match the original subject, and miniscule references to the Baron's life (i.e., memories the ghost-self has of his human life as it related to his Head). I wouldn't say no to more details on the Baron's human life. ðŸ¤
+ Snakelets being their own, actualized selves (Side note: the whole Crankshaft versus Crookshanks thing half-broke my brain for a moment when we first met Harper's Kneazle. For just a fleeting moment, I thought Harper believed he owned Hermione's familiar. I had a good chuckle at myself.)
Mind, the whole thing was a resounding success, but I can't very well parrot back every paragraph.