https://erexen.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] erexen.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] beyondwandpoint 2019-05-02 07:35 pm (UTC)

This... just exactly This kind of interaction SSHG! šŸ˜

Ahhh, and now Crabbe realizes Just How screwed he is... dun dun duuuuuun. *smirks evily* Darn Crankshaft, he outed hidden Harper, poor guy.

[Now that she’s no longer scandalised by the idea of an inflammatory ā€˜thank you’ card - it had seemed to rather defeat the purpose - she can look at it more objectively.

He’s captured her quite nicely, which strikes her as kind. She’s there in the blouse she’s currently wearing, and whether deliberate or not, he’s depicted her hair with the waterfall break Madam Pomfrey had charmed on Sunday. Hermione had liked it, she thinks, looking at the card. It had flattered her. She has to wonder, in passing, if he’d liked it, too.]

[He raises his wand, points it at the stamp, prepares to perform the ā€˜Finite Incantatem’ to reduce it to parchment once more, and just in time she realises what he means to do. ā€œWait!ā€ She cries out, her hand shooting up without thinking to grab his arm. ā€œYou can’t destroy that...ā€

ā€œYou didn’t mean to keep it?ā€

She blushes and puts it with her things, ā€œThat’s what Reducios are for...ā€ The stamp and seal soon join it. ā€œIt was my parchment anyway,ā€ she mumbles under her breath as though it might justify the response...]


The little things are what Tell the story, this gorgeous little interaction is so adorable in it's simplicity. These are precisely the type of generically comfortable times that proves to be a building blocks to a real relationship!

[ā€œMiss Granger, I’m not accustomed to expressing my appreciation all that often. It would simplify matters, greatly, if I didn’t have to fight you to do so on one of the rare occasions I attempt to.ā€

She looks at him for a long moment, collecting herself before responding. ā€œYou’re clearly selling yourself short. I can point to a dozen ā€˜thank you’ notes from this evening alone...ā€

Cheeky thing.]


Sorting the "gifts", working to help each other with something domestic in nature, both of them "teaching" each other soothing bits of minutia.

[At the gasp, he’d started to watch her more closely, how she ran her fingers, probingly across the surface, the spindles of the door. The ā€˜Oooh!’ as she began to realise what he’d done.

ā€œIt’s real wood!ā€ She coos. Severus finds the sound odd, because he really isn’t used to it. ]

[Hermione immediately blushes at her reaction, because the key thing wasn’t that it was real as opposed to expertly Transfigured wood. Mere hours ago, she couldn’t have told the difference anyway. No, what really mattered was he had made this for her. And she’s doing a piss poor job of letting him know that.

Severus is so used to doing things that don’t go appreciated, he’s actually more comfortable with the response. On the contrary, he’s greatly pleased that she had learnt from his earlier attempt to teach her the differences. That’s something that annoys him almost daily, that people refuse to learn what he endeavours to teach... ]

[And she’s run out of descriptors in the process. (He finds that funny, particularly the look on her face when she mentally adds her own name to the list of people she needs to gift imaginary thesauri to.) But Hermione feels his initial pleasure, and subsequent amusement and slowly it reaches her and keeps her from tumbling arse over tip into something irredeemably awkward. (Although she does her very best to come so incredibly close while still scraping for adverbs.)

ā€œThank you,ā€ she finally finishes, slightly breathless, looking fondly over her shoulder at the table again. ā€œIt’s magnificent.ā€

ā€œYou’re quite welcome,ā€ he replies evenly, and then he smirks. ā€œAnd that is how one graciously accepts someone’s gratitude.ā€]


Hermione's reaction to Severus' efforts is priceless and perfect for him to receive graciously. Can't wait to watch these two growing into the people they have the potential to be to each other.

Far too much to write about to cover Everything I adore, so much to love in this story.

Thank You for the story and another Thank You to MyWitch for the spectacular Art provided. Hey Ginger, how cool would it be to Write MyWitch IN as the Art Professor!!!!??? Ohhhh and maybe a Severus look alike Cousin to keep for her own???

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